本站原创如何写话题作文(办开放作文)
话题作文,是近年来湖北流行的作文模式.它常常以友谊,友爱,奉献,关心,勤奋等为话题,给出一段材料,对上述内容进行解释,说明和限制,要求考生结合事例,写一篇文章.
写作时,先看懂材料,分析是关于什么的.心中有个主题.
文章分三段写.第一段——总起段:改写提示语,或材料,两至三句即可.做到开门见山.(一般现在时)
第二段,写一个自己经历的故事,或别人的故事,来论述某种品质的重要性.最好采用总——分——(总)结构.写成三步曲:遭遇挫折/困难/失意——转折点(人或物的出现,他/它们如何帮助,起到作用)——情况好转/取得进步等.多用动作,心理,情景等细节描写,少用对话.(一般过去式)
第三段——总结段.用漂亮的句子点题,一至二句就够了.(一般现在时)
开篇常用的好句:
1.Asyouknow,friendshipisofgreatimportance/value/helptoourdailylives/studies.Ilearnedthiromwhathappenedtome.
2.It'sclearthatkindnessdoesgoodtous,whichmakesushappyandgenerous.Withoutkindness,withoutlife.
3.Thereisnodoubtthatilemakesadifferencetoourdailylives.whenyouiletoothers,theworldwillshine.
4.Astheoldsayinggoes(正如古谚语所云),thedevotionoflovecankeepusawayfromsufferingsandmakeueelhappy.
中间段落的开篇句子:
Istillrememberthedayswhen等
Therewasatimewhen等
Ithappenedalongtimeagowhen等
中间段落的结尾句子:
Onlythen,didIrealizetheimportance/value/ofdevotionoflove.
Withouthardwork,Icouldn'theachievedsomuch.
Notonlydidheoffermehelp,butalsohetaugesomuch.
最后一段常用的好句子:
Whatmatters/valuesiriendship.Wecanlearnalotfromit.
It'riendshipthathelpsusachievesomuch.
Thanksto/Dueto(因为)theloveandkindnesssheshowedtome,whichmakesitpossibleformetofacemysufferingsandhardshipbrely.
Owingto(因为)thepainsIsuffered,Icangetoverdifficultieswithoutfearnow,whichremindmeofmore./arearemindertome./areofgreatvaluetomeforever./makesadifferencetome.
例文:Thedevotionoflovecanmakesufferingsawayandwelehappinessback.
Thereisnodoubtthatthedevotionofloveisofgreatvaluetousinourdailylives,whichmakesusawayfromsufferingsandhappy.
IstillrememberthedayswhenIsufferedalot.Ithappenedtomeunfortunatelyinmyjuniorschooldays.Caughtinatrafficjam,IgotsobadlyinjuredinmylegsthatIhadtolieinbed,feelineryfrustratedandworried.WhatshouldIdotodowithmystudiesandhowcanIfacemyingfinalexamTomygreatsurpriseandjoy,myteachersandclasatescametome.Notonlydidtheydevotetheirtimeandpassion(热情)tomyschoolings(学业),butalsotheyencouragedmenottogiveuportoloseheart.Whatimpressedmemost(使我印象最深刻的)wasthataclasateofminehelpedmetogotoclasseveryday,,usinghisbicycleinspiteof(不管,不顾)coldandrain,whenmylegsweremuchbetter.Withthehelpofthem,IcouldfacemysufferingswithileandfinallyIkeptupwithmyclasates,passingthefinalexam.Stillnow,Ihenotroubleindealingwithmyschoolingsandgettingalongwithothers.YoucanimaginewhatIthinkofandhowhappyIfeel.
Thankstotheloveandkindnesstheyshowedtome,whichmakesitpossibleformetofacemysufferingsandhardshipbrelyandhappily.